My poem called "Real Freedom"?

Freedom is not when a person is necessary out of a man made Jail.


They say it is Freedom.


But alas, one can only say "I am free,


When you have accepted Jesus Christ, the Prince of Peace into you heart.


Then only, although a man is in a made Jail, you can truly say "I am free"





Don't allow Satan to keep you in his jail


For unlike the man made jail the only way you will get free


Is by choice.


Then and only then can and will the Son of Man sets you free.


Whom the Son sets free, is free indeed.





Don't hesitate, the time is now


For tomorrow is promised to no one


Make up your mind and take a stand


Satan would like you to bow


And crown him king, but we should know


There is only one King and that is the King of Kings





Jesus Christ the Rose of Sharon


Came into this world with a plan


He had you and me on His mind


Since the beginning of time


Your photo He engraved on the palm of His hand.





Choose wise and do it now


For He has a plan and purpose for your life

My poem called "Real Freedom"?
This is a very beautiful and thought out Poem. Betty Boop's words were so unkind regarding this beautiful poem. She would do well to heed the words of this inspiring Poem. "Don't allow satan to keep you in jail". Christ the Rose of Sharon has come to set you free. May we experience this freedom in Christ. (Revelation 3:20).





Thanks Incognito for sharing these thoughts with us today. Keep sharing and keep hope alive. Jesus saves.
Reply:Satan KEEPS...... NO ONE..... in Jail!





His Kingdom is that OF DARKNESS and BLINDNESS !





(2Corinthians 4:3-to-7) But if our gospel be hid, = it is hid to them that are lost:





(2Co 4:4) In whom the god of this world = hath blinded the minds = of them which believe not, = lest the light of the glorious gospel of Christ, = who is the image of God, should shine unto them.





(2Co 4:5) For we preach not ourselves, = but Christ Jesus the Lord; and ourselves your servants for Jesus' sake.





(2Co 4:6) For God, = who commanded the light to shine out of darkness, = hath shined in our hearts, = to give the light of the knowledge = of the glory of God in the face of Jesus Christ.





(2Co 4:7) But = we have this treasure in earthen vessels, = that the excellency of the power may be of God, = and not of us.





All are in Satans Kingdom of Darkness ...... TILL..... The Son [Christ Jesus] Sets us..... FREE!





(John 8:36) If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.





AND....





(Colossians 1:12-13-14) giving thanks to the Father, who has made us meet to be partakers of the inheritance of the saints in light.





(Col 1:13) For He has delivered us = from the power of darkness = and has translated us into the kingdom of His dear Son;





(Col 1:14) in whom = we have redemption through His blood, = the remission of sins.





Sorry..... MY Photo ... IS NOT ENGRAVED... on the palm of His Hand......! There is NO Scriptural Reference for "THAT!"





Thanks for Hearing.... THE WORD OF GOD! RR.
Reply:i am not even going to address the subject matter.





where is the cadence? where is the lyricism? how many times are you going to use the same words?





freedom man jail


freedom free jesus man jail free


satan jail man free man free


free free satan king king


king king jesus plan plan





get a thesaurus...and an education.
Reply:Amen. Some preaching. Finally :).
Reply:you hit home,sweety that's why they are jealous.your poem is great.now,if you could just try to get some rhyme,it will be perfect.thanx for the reminder.
Reply:I'm sorry, what was the question?
Reply:I like it...so very true! Its sad that sometimes people on the outside think that following Christ is equivalent to "jail"...little do they know...following Christ only sets you free!





God Bless
Reply:Well done
Reply:You are really locking yourself into a cocoon of ignorance and you may never be free again. As for your poem It doesn't rhyme. It sucks. The whole idea of religion is nonsense.


Kisses Betty B.
Reply:Yes, I think your poem can be called "Real Freedom". Thanks for sharing. :)
Reply:No structure, rhyme, rythym ...





Sorry, it isn't poetry.