Daughter Asking for Money Poem rate 1 - 10 1 being the worst?

A rose to Sharon


Who’s at home swearin


At her buttercup


Who just called her up





She wanted more money


She said come on honey


Lets find a way


To brighten her day





I said get a life


She’s not my wife


Tell Toby to work


And not be a jerk





But it’s Christmas day


And she’ll stay away


She’ll ask for no more


I laughed on the floor





I said look to above


Sharon my love


If you raised her right


She’ll see the light

Daughter Asking for Money Poem rate 1 - 10 1 being the worst?
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Reply:The buttercup reference was confusing until later in the poem, but it was pretty good.





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Reply:ha ha. its funny. 6
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Reply:i give it a 7
Reply:a 10 excelent